well.. the poems that i read were not so short. Hey guys, you could really write good poems!!! Well done!! extra marks for all. How did you do that? care to share??? gheee
yah what he said,itis because we let our minds to fraternise and mingle conspicuasly with our soul, and all the extra ordinary jargon filled our thots, in simple english we became ourselves
well, staying apart from my mom made me create such a poem for her..! she always thought us literature n i had to make use of her teachings n write a beautiful one for my dearest mom who i hardly met for the past few years!
I'm VERY proud to have been accepted into such a good university known to the world (i think)- That's why my poem's about the art of life. Beautiful poem. I love it. I'm so proud of myself.
There are several factors that contribute to a good poem or a bad poem and this is your state of mind at that particular moment when you begin to write your poem. I Hope we were all in superb moments...
wow, it waz a feeling that i had 4 avery long tym. Thru dat poem i managed 2 get off dat heavy ladden feeling outa ma hart. Actually i was jus flowing,,, a dream cum true indeed.
Emm..writing a poem is not an ordinary writing. During my high school, my teacher told me that,
"when it comes to write a poem, write with your heart, seacrh your feeling and try to use your life experince as your guidence. If you can do that, a good poem will emerged."
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It just came from my mind that I got to write it. Like water flowing :)
yah what he said,itis because we let our minds to fraternise and mingle conspicuasly with our soul, and all the extra ordinary jargon filled our thots, in simple english we became ourselves
im sorry abt da first comment i ddnt dat i wrote bad english bt hope u got ma message...
i dd it again im sorry bt u got ma message
to some pple its easy but here a lot came to my mind,but later i found my way..wrote the lil i can, seeked and got help from friends.
well, staying apart from my mom made me create such a poem for her..! she always thought us literature n i had to make use of her teachings n write a beautiful one for my dearest mom who i hardly met for the past few years!
i only wrote 4 lines
so,no comment...
huhu
I'm VERY proud to have been accepted into such a good university known to the world (i think)- That's why my poem's about the art of life. Beautiful poem. I love it. I'm so proud of myself.
HAHAHAHA!
God I love English :D
motive drives one towards success only with the right mind setting
Well,i'm not so good in poem writing but i tried...:)
There are several factors that contribute to a good poem or a bad poem and this is your state of mind at that particular moment when you begin to write your poem. I Hope we were all in superb moments...
wow, it waz a feeling that i had 4 avery long tym. Thru dat poem i managed 2 get off dat heavy ladden feeling outa ma hart. Actually i was jus flowing,,, a dream cum true indeed.
I'm not very gud at poetry but i believe i did my best.
Writing the poems was good and it gave us a chance to express and vent some of our emotions
i love poetry and i love myself very much that is why i wrote about myself and itwas not difficult because it is all abt what uthink and feel....
Emm..writing a poem is not an ordinary writing. During my high school, my teacher told me that,
"when it comes to write a poem, write with your heart, seacrh your feeling and try to use your life experince as your guidence. If you can do that, a good poem will emerged."
I hope that the above tips might comes in handy.
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